Tuesday, October 5, 2010

Gabby Lui


by Gabby

You can see it in her

She waits, longing for someone to

help.

It suffocates her.

Strangles until answers are pronounced.

Devours till

her

Mind is set straight.

Will she

escape

From her own disturbance?

No one can ignore

insanity.


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2 comments:

  1. Paige CookOctober 5, 2010 at 6:27 AM

    GABBBY!
    This is freaking wonderful. I really enjoy how down the side says "help her escape insanity." Nice work the emotions in this are amazing!
    -paige.

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  2. J.T. KnightOctober 5, 2010 at 6:27 AM

    Gabby-
    This is really good. The way the words to the side read an entirely separate message is amazing. Its even better when you see how it ties into the rest of the poem.
    -J.T.

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